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Hurt, rejected;
You freed me.
Never expected
what you would be..

Deeper pain
Left in the cold
never again
will I be so bold..

Hated, lost,
I miss you so
such cost
love paid by woe..

Dreaming,
falling to dark
seemingly
you’ve marked..

My heart
for the last
Depart..
Ashes of past.

Grave
won;
save
one..
©2006-2008 ~DragonslayerOrin
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Submitted: April 2, 2006
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I wrote this poem with someone in mind, of course.. But I do not speak openly of her.. Nor do I wish her any ill. This poem slowly disentegrates into madness..
Because that's always what heartbreak is for me.
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~inuyashababe91:iconinuyashababe91: Nov 23, 2006, 2:04:40 AM
i know heartbeak can hurt tootooe but life goes on and you will well have found someoen else ans i know she loves you dearly you to might last a long time and i hope so you to need eachother